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Orchard Primary & Pre-School

"Small enough to care, Big enough to inspire"

Week 5

Monday 1st February - today I would like you to begin writing your diary entry, imagining that you are the character you have chosen. You only need to do the date, introduction and the first paragraph today. We will complete the rest on Tuesday! Please see Miss Mabbott's example below to help you get started! Remember to use your plan to help you and not to copy my ideas as they are boring and yours are so much better!

 

Remember to write in paragraphs, use joined up writing, capital letters, full stops and commas, emotive language (feelings), first person, past tense, conjunctions and time adverbials.

 

Tuesday 2nd February - today I would like you to finish writing your diary entry, imagining that you are the character you have chosen. You only need to do the second paragraph and your conclusion today. Please see Miss Mabbott's example below to help you get started! Remember to use your plan to help you and not to copy my ideas as they are boring and yours are so much better!

 

Remember to write in paragraphs, use joined up writing, capital letters, full stops and commas, emotive language (feelings), first person, past tense, conjunctions and time adverbials.

Wednesday 3rd February- today I would like you to read back through your diary entry and with a grown up find any spelling mistakes or any mistakes with capital letters/ punctuation (in school I would use a pink pen to show these). I would like you then to choose a different colour to correct these (in school we would use a purple pen). Then I would like you to begin to write up your diary in best (you may use a pen to do this - show me your best handwriting).  See Miss Mabbott's editing below!

 

We will then finish writing our diary entries up in best on Thursday 4th February.

Thursday 4th February- today I would like you to finish writing your diary entry up in best - remember to use your edits that you made on Wednesday to help you and then share your work on purple mash!
Friday 5th February - use the following link to explore the young detective image https://www.pobble365.com/the-young-detective/ I would then like you to write a short diary entry / a couple of paragraphs imagining you are the young detective. Remember your capital letters, full stops and remember to write in first person!
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